Shooting Star Editing

SHORT STORY

evaluation

My short story evaluations are constructive critiques of the big picture elements, intended to help you better connect with your readers. Big picture elements include characterization, plot, pacing, and internal consistency.

Note: This evaluation does not include detailed critiques or corrections of smaller elements like word choice, sentence structure, grammar, or punctuation. I will, however, point out general patterns I see with these. It’s important to get the big picture elements in place first so you don’t end up paying twice for the same type of editing.

My goal as an editor is to understand your work and what you’re trying to accomplish with it, and then to help you achieve your vision and take your readers on an immersive journey with your characters.

I will send you a copy of your manuscript with comments, as well as a letter going over important strengths of your work and suggestions for how to make a stronger connection with your intended audience.

If you’re interested in an sample edit, please fill out the form below.

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A sample edit may give you insight on your work and help determine whether we would be a good fit. We can discuss your goals and hopes for your work and how I can help you achieve that vision. I will provide a quote. If we decide to work together, we will each sign a contract, with protections for your work and a statement of work that defines the scope of services.