The first chapter, the first page, even the first paragraph is where potential readers will decide whether they want to spend their time and their mental and emotional energy on your book. This evaluation is a constructive critique, intended to help you connect with your intended audience through an analysis of the big picture elements. Big picture elements include characterization, conflict, worldbuilding, plot, and internal consistency.

Note: This evaluation does not include detailed critiques or corrections of smaller elements like word choice, sentence structure, grammar, or punctuation. I will, however, point out general patterns I see with these. When seeking editing services, it’s recommended to take care of the big picture elements first, so you don’t end up paying again for editing of the smaller details.

My goal as an editor is to understand your work and what you’re trying to accomplish with it, and then to help you achieve your vision, immerse your readers, and get them hooked into your book. Every chapter and every scene of your novel or novella is important. Every chapter needs be as polished as the first. But the first chapter is the part of the story that gets you in the door.